Rough Cut #1 - Feedback

After screening the first cut of my short film to both my media teachers, both of them a pleased with the overall cut in regards to its potential once it's flaws have been amended. I did receive  feedback from both my media teachers commenting on various aspects of my film; sequencing and performance issues are the main issues that my edit currently has. 

I have made two separate note sheets that address the individual comments my teachers made on the first cut of "A Lost Soul". Both contain specific notes on what feedback my teachers made regarding numerous factors of the edit and will be addressed within the next few drafts of my project.