A Lost Soul ( Rough Cut #1)

This is the first cut of 'A Lost Soul' which is a basic assembly of all the footage I had shot during principle photography. Overall this early cut of the film helps me identify where I need to progress from here in order to improve my project within the next edit. But this edit also helps me visualise all of the footage and learn what helps to achieve my envisioned tone but what else can be done to further strengthen my vision.